i feel cold and broken
like a child
allowing one to lead them
away from a fight
just there
barely
lost within their own
leting go of reason
fighting for no reason
other than being angry
lost in their pain
the touch of a loved one
an echo
in a silenced room
the silence deffening
shattering your calm
tears falling
like shards of glass
shattering appon impact
slicing open
the unsuspecting
only trying to cleen up the mess
only trying to help
in thier own calm, quiet way.
thier kindness making the pain deepen
their love hurting
your wave of anger
Author notes
when you are past it all. beyond caring. except for the sake of your pain. and saving those you love from...
A contest entry
- ~*~Make Me Think~*~ by Bend to Break.
600 points, ended February 5, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Hate Me, Kill Me by thorlorn thanatos.
380 points, ended March 30, 2007, 102 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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this was a great write and i can really relate to all that you are saying and feeling in this write..your words are very strong and powerful..i enjoyed reading this write as well...keep writting your very talented and good luck in the contest...
~Chrissy~ -
deep. you can feel the emotion through the writing, and that's what counts.
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your spelling sucks, but i liked the poem, particularly the first stanza
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good job
I ejoyed reading this poem it painted a picture that is great. I understand this poem really well it seems like something that my husband has gone through
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