I watched
the hurt
the pain
the anguish
the mixed feelings
of love turned to hate
I saw
the hurt go away
the pain healing
the anguish turn
to love again
I know
time will tell
my little angel
will be well
Her new man
her new friends
her nearest
her dearest
will all be
with her
and never again
will she be struck
by one who says love
but shows hate
and friends that
say run from him
and is now in his arms
A contest entry
- Heartbroken by Love-Lee.
300 points, ended January 1, 2008, 44 entries
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Comments
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Wow I have been through this but fortunately not with him! But it is very heartbreaking knowin someone who says they love you beat you, I remember being so confused then and it seemed to take me forever to get out of soething so horrible... Anyways... Enough of that... Thanks for the great entry!
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Wonderful poem on your girl...
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