I used to have him
And I want him once more
"Beauty knows no pain"
To win you might be sore
There's a constant ache inside my chest
Where my heart used to be
If only it could go away
Then I could just be free
Held in his arms
Or being by his side
I just hope he knows
How much I've cried
Author notes
J.S. again
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aww, this is so sad! (curles up in your lap to offer you comfort) I hope if this is true taht you feel mich better soon! (rubs pink nose against your cheek)
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Great
Outstanding JOb!!!!!!!!!!!!! to this poem i reallly enjoyed this poem really i did. it really spoke for me and what I am going through right now, and that all I have done is cried day in and day out for weeks at a time. Alsome yet, well written poem Outstanding I'd give u all da applauds for this poem if I had them u did just marvelous job and straight to the point.Wowwwwwwwww!!!!!! all I can say. my favorite lines to the poem
Held in his arms
Or being by his side
I just hope he knows
How much I've cried
Dat said it all right there and wish mines could see how much i have cried for him since day one. way to go with this poem.
U keep da ink flowing with all ya poems and don't stop writing cause enjoy reading ya poems and can relate.. once again Well, Written take care ttyl nxt time
Bubbles
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