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Kill You Too Well

This isn't life I feel
I try so hard to be
To be perfect for you all
And I hurt my closest
While I try to run away
My heart still beats
For the one that got away
Who I chased away
I want to hold you
While your hurting inside
Console you forever
But I kill you too much
Drain your life all away
I put down the knife
Fear tells me no
And live another day
Trying to be your pedestal

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  • Love of a Bullet
    February 11, 2007

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    Ahem, if I may clarify... she is clearly discussing the recent death of Anna Nicole Smith and how her dream of burying her face in those monster melons and making tugboat noises all night long is now as smashed as a priest in the McDonalds kidde ball pit.

    Poetry is about reading between the lines. Duh.


  • angleof death
    February 5, 2007
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    awww so sad so who is the one who got away and why do you seem so sad lately.