Dragons fighting
One old, one young
One well established,
One a little far flung
Each fighting for dominance
Each fighting for them
To take control of the land;
Claim the dragon's den
One ancient, one new
The smell of blood runs through
Clashes and destruction
Where once happiness, was true
Change always is
a dangerous game
As dragon's are fighting,
From red, to blue flame...
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful concept, and of course your rhyming is always 'there'. Keep going!
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this paints a beutiful picture. wonderfull imagery. its a little odd though, as usually when i read your poetry i see some refference to your life, but i cant see that in this. Am i missing something huge or is it really just random.
its a good poem and it has power behind it. makes me want to know what happens next! write a sequal! who wins, how did he win, what happens to the loser.
opens a story. you could use this as a prologue to a novel! its almost tolkien esq...
ill stop rambling now...well you asked for a comment. hope you had fun last night, might see you in a little while.
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