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Your Dream

You wake up from the dream.
Wondering where you were.
Found yourself in your room.
Filled with wonder.

Then you realize that
your dream wasn't a dream
The one you love is
by your side, as always

 

You dreampt you got married

then you realize its true

your in Hawaii and its

your honeymoon

 

You dreamt another dream

that you were pregnant

Then you see your stomach

and realize its true

 

You dreampt another dream

that you were old and ready

to lay down your head with

the love of your life beside you

You dreampt another dream

you were outside the gates

of heaven, as you realize

its true your time has come

 

Your dream came true

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  • tawk gold member
    February 26, 2007
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    I love your dream. Your write is so full of love and emotions. Good luck in my contest

  • MovieFan
    February 7, 2007

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    I really liked this poem; What a dream. I liked the way you started each stanza leading straight to the end with your dream came true. Great poem and thanks for the entry