Why should i be the one to get
a broken heart, just because you
want to date someone while still seeing me.
Why should i go to bed
crying my eyes out because
i love you to much to tell you.
Why can't i tell people that we are dating?
Do i hate it so much?
Tell me why?
When I think about how many times
you told me that you want to date other
people while seeing me, i just want to
end it, but i know i can't
because i care to much for you.
Tell me why, i just need to know
the answers to these questions,
just tell me why.
Author notes
This is what is happening to me right now, so i wrote the poem to try to help with the pain.
A contest entry
- Kindred Writer's (INVITE ONLY!!!) by PerfectImperfection.
600 points, ended March 25, 2007, 16 entries
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just so touching and very heartfelt, how hard it is, drowning you in confusions and everything...
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I can see that you wrote this a while back so I really want to know first if anything has changed for you?
If not, I say no matter how much you are in love and if this person can't be faithful and respectful to you,,for the sake of your well being,, move on.
I am sorry if this sounds harsh, but believe me,, it will just continue and you will end up even more hurt, the kind that leaves scars on your heart and faith in others.
I hope this situation has resovled since feb
If you need a friend, I am here for you!
Jasminerose
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I liked it very much. It's so full of emotion and pain. Great write
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This is so sad
It's painful
I liked how it related to the title all the wya though, making it interesting and giving it a point in it
It would look better if you capitalised I though!
I really liked it
Well done
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Sorry for such a late reply to this one, but I'd like to say that this poem's written out of pure emotion. I understand what you're trying to depict, not only that we could understand, but also if you'd find the answer while writing it...
A guy who wants to date another person while he's dating you aint really a good sign for anyone. I might not know him, but thats the general gist of it. I dunno, maybe he's...lost or afraid to actually commit to you. I was in a similiar position once... I was the guy. Fact is, he may be just blind to it all, and once he's actually dated a person..he's going to find out how wrong it was and how he loved you instead. Gah. memories.
well hopefuly this can prove to be of any help to you, and last of all I did enjoy the poem. It was great. Emotional and pure.
Cheers,
Khalid
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Thank you so very much for your entry Melissa! [Rest of comment with held until the end..
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A very well expressed piece of confusion, and the heart that aches in the balance. Good luck in all that you do!!!
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wow this is soo good very very good
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