look in the mirror..what do you see
see the truth..see the lies
see the hidden matters..see your deceptive charms
see you..see me
see the ugly world..see the beautiful nature
see us..see them
what do you see?
tell me..what do u see?
see me killing you..see you killing me
see you kissing me..see me kissing you
see patience..see boredom
see love..see hatred
see time pass us by..see us passing time by
you see..i see
you and i gonna fly high
see the clear sky..see the innocent birds
see the clouds come together..watch the rain falling down
see me..see you
go back to earth..see them
see people lying..hating..swearing
see the wars man made..see the peace man betrayed
going deeper in earth
bury all the pain and hurt..bury ourselves
tired of this world..wanna run
above..underneath
no way known for us to resort to
but stare in the mirror
you see it rising from further light
you see it coming to save you
you and me
raising into the sky
see it there..where the new small world goes on
running..fearing..seeing
go and hide till the end
cause time's gonna eat you up
see it..stare again..much deeper
what do you see
is it still there
or it's gone like the last one
will u wait till the end
do you see it clear enough
see..what do you see?
Tell me what do u see
In the mirror..what do you see
do u see what you want to see
or do u pretend you see it there
is it really there what u don't want to see
do u see it coming..see it going
see it move..see it still
see it fight..see it calm
see it reflect in your mind..
or you can barely see it
Eventually it's a memory
u see it..i see it
you go there..you run here
you see the dead..you see the living
see what else
tell me what's there
in your mirror..in my mirror
see what u do say..see what u do mean
see what's exposed..see what's posed
see what they're saying..see what we're saying
see what's exact..clear..see what's vague..indistinct
Do you see..or you r just blind
see us in the mirror laughing..crying
we go in deeper ways
see it in the mirror
and pretend that we are just blind......
A contest entry
- Green To Gold- Pay It Forward- For HM poems only. by Mercury Rising.
600 points, ended July 8, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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too long for meh contest.
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a cascade of thoughts and feelings, very deep and needs some thinking about, its worth a second read as at first it is just a rush of words until you read it slower and let it sink in thank you fro sharing this with us and keep up the good work
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Thanks alot for your lovely comment
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This is quite the verbal cascade that seems as though it was written in one spontaneous rush of inspiration or something. Thanks for entering my contest, and best of luck with this wonderful poem.
David
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Awesome
"see it there..where the new small world goes on" very nice. i love the line. Great write!
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Please make sure to re-read my rules and resubmit your poem if you wish.
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It's ok..After I submitted it I wanted to remove it coz i was thinking about the rules & thinking & thinking but it was an error, good u removed it..
Thnx <3
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i like this poem, it makes u thing u know=)
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I know,lol
Thnx for the comment
<3
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This is really different , thank you!
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Hope that you liked it..
<3
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wow
I love this masterpiece. WELL DONE!! Just what do we see?..Well I see three cheers for you..Penn On!
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Thnaks hun for the nice comment..
<3
GloriousGift
--Heba
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