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Key Change

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When rhyme scheme frames dimensions few suspect
then climb dream flames, intentions true, respect.
No boundaries, no limit locks the mind.
so sound are these,  throw spirit blocks behind.
Reach out, think, skein, words hidden blind reject,
speech doubt, ink vain, chords bidden bind, select.
Avoid inconstant compromise unkind,
a void-spin instant, dumb surmise. Unwind
extrapolations lazy, circumspect,
examinations mazy. Reconnect.
Free frequencies from spectrum unassigned,
see sequencies, connexions, realigned.
Sell static short, key change, unbattern hatch,
elastic thought, free range, fun pattern match.

 

 

 

Author notes

Each syllable in each couplet rhymes with the corresponding syllable in the line with which it is coupled ... Enjoy !

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  • Thrilla N9nna 503
    July 4, 2007

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    lol this was so hard to read! i was so confused and then i read your authors notes and was like 'aww' so now moving on... this was such a good write and i hope to read more of your work.

  • natchstucco
    June 23, 2007

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    great flow

    well...I guess I better get out my thesurus and figure out some of this.lol. this is great, I have tried it and found some success, but you aced it.

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  • mland5
    June 23, 2007
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    good poetry technique great wording i like it alot

  • CinematicInk
    June 19, 2007

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    This would be simply amazing read aloud. The flow is consistent and the thoughts are cohesive.