Dark, deep brown eyes, piercing into my soul.
Shining brown stars, staring straight through me.
Brown eyes, making me cry, making me bleed!
Breaking my heart, cutting into my thoughts, making me cease to even be real.
Glistening topaz, shining golden with admirable beauty.
Starry brown, looking into me, making me go insane!
You, with your damn stunning brown eyes, make me cry, bleed me dry, and kill me with every glance.
So addictive, just like a drug, I can't look away.
Author notes
A poem about a boy with stunning brown eyes that kill me with every glance.
A contest entry
- *xXDarkXx*xXEyesXx* by dying-gothic-roses.
350 points, ended February 5, 2007, 9 entries
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Comments
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Th is is one of your best for sure! I love the way you took the very thoughts in your head and twisted them into the words needed for the contest!
So addictive, just like a drug, I can't look away
I thikn this was my favourite one becaus eit is so painstakingly true!
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AWSOME
xX*Cheyenne*Xx*
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