Since long I discerned that
I am conserved on this Earth
until I adored you
you know when I admire you
you cease me on your infatuation
not only me this globe is held on your desire
this intimacy which clothe the conformity to this planet
a cohesion with the motif of microseconds
and veritably a integrity with the Genesis of nature
with each munificent
Oh my love who are you?
And from where you transported this lure
and the divining
which winds this creation
with a cue of your beam
what I witness at your face
when you magnetize me for a woo
and when you label me for a embrace
and when you manipulate for a crush
your passion stimulates to me which is
more essential than this breeze
than this water
than this sunlight
and, than this voluminous face of the sky
Oh my worship
you need to comprehend that
I admire you so much...
Author notes
Based on picture of option no...7
"Rules? What rules?"
A contest entry
- Picture contest lots of options by Mingan Tzar Avarus.
425 points, ended April 17, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This poem just seems awkward to me, no offense but I don't favor it. ~Corey~
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Thank you for entering and good luck in my contest.
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Metaphysical Love! This is a really unique poem. It seems like it could be about a spiritual love. It reminds me a little of John Donne's Poetry.
You might want to change
"a integrity"
to an.
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Wonderful
I really enjoy this beautiful poem of yours.
Every line is touching. Keep the ink flowing. Good luck in the contest.
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Great stuff! This is an amazing write! Very well done. My favorite part would have to be:
"your passion stimulates to me which is
more essential than this breeze
than this water
than this sunlight
and, than this voluminous face of the sky"
Shady Lane
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Lovely
My...this is a work of passion,total surrender and devotion to the woman of his life, his wife..How refreshing to see, how no sacrifice would be, To great for won adored...Thats' what life is living for...His dream, His queen! Magnificent! -
Great depth and inner feeling shown here. Keep the fluidity of your pen flowing!!
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Speechless...simply speechless...
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very deep
this is deep!! i am going to bookmark this and come back to it because i am sitting here trying to absorb all that you have written here and i just can not at this moment. you always amaze me you know. thank you for posting this for me to read. viyanna rosemarie
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