Truth
If they say it to another
But say they dont mean it
How can you tell its not you
They also decieve
When they mention three little words
Your whole world turns upside down
How do you know their words
Are not turned around
Could what they say be opposite in meaning
And your the one they are trying to trick into believing
Its all so complicated and confusing
These doubts your mind cant help crossing
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this is good has a nice flow xxlorren
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This poem shows us that you are an observant poet who has depth in thought.
Natural insticts are a gift from God. You definitely are aware of yours. Intellegent thoughts are weaved throughout this poem sending an important message. Well done dear poet.
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sounds like a player to me. why do women discount their instincts, men too for that matter? why, tell me why? I mean, if your instincts are saying, 'run like hell' why don't we listen? my screamed at me loud and clear before I clipped that wire but I stayed, like an idiot, i stayed.
The doubts are there for a reason, that's what I say.
Granted, I didn't listen to mine and surmised that I could survive whatever it was that I was being warned against. Blah...I'm rambling. it's six a.m.
I wish you the best, my dear. Frantic pixie - that's a cute name.
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