shes a fallen angel now
that wench that left me dry
her wings of white were blasted off
before she made me cry
i showed her the life i want
and the love that i can give
i made a promise to her once
and made her my reason to live
she cheated once and i forgot
the second time i cried
the hardest part about it all
the bitch she fucking lied
i can deal with sorrows now
because the cut is deep
i feel the angels crashing down
because she made me week
i ran away because of her
my heart it bled and dried
my reason now for loving her
had all but gone and died
i hope shes happy without me
im making my way through
but every time im close to love
im thinking she is you
just cheat on me like everyone
make my weak heart bleed
dieing for a long lost love
thats the cure i need
Author notes
yes.. i was cheated on.. and due to it.. im almost afraid to love again.. but someone i know very well is holding my head above water right now.. thanks babe.. you know who you are..
A contest entry
- Show me pure loneliness and pain by ThunderCatWonder08.
390 points, ended March 13, 2007, 23 entries
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This is a very meaningful poem. Luckily, I haven't been cheated on yet. (then again I'm still young.) But I can only imagine how hard it is. Its good you have some wonderful people around you to help you through it.
Nice piece
Good luck on the contest too
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I LOVE THIS
i can relate im always cheated on when i get close happens again makes me scared to open up again i know how you feel ur words how great u expressed yourself is very great xxlorren
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So no wonder you hate cheaters so much- we're apparantly in the same boat. Well, I'm here to talk to- so feel better. Great write.
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thanks
thanks babe.. i appreciate that.. MISS YOU
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This is beautiful. I enjoyed reading it. The pain is clear but there's hope too. None of the other poems contain that little seedling. I just don't understand the heart of a cheat. I couldn't bear the look on my love's face if he would be betrayed by me. And to forgive a couple of times before calling off...geesh! you're a saint or a masochist...
Best of luck in the contest and count yourself very lucky to have a close connection keeping you afloat.
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