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[ As My Heart Is Breaking ]

As my heart is breaking
you can stand there
only faking.

As I breathe in so hard
you can only look at me
in that way of discard.

You never thought about
me as I worried with
only little doubt.

How I thought you cared
when really you were just
playing with me being scared.

Fearing, wondering, "What if..."
in my mind as I dream about
falling off a cliff.

As you watch me die just
know you're nothing
to me inside.


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It just came to me with everything that is going on but maybe things will change only time can tell at this point. Tell me what you think. I thank all of you in advance for reading this and/or commenting.

~Danica Rose Hunt

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  • Lady Altheia
    February 25, 2007

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    This piece is very heartfelt. Your writing has improved since last i visited your poetry. Times are going to be tough but times change and it will eventually get better.


  • csflut
    February 5, 2007

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    hey

    whats up mi amiga whats goin on tell the black man sumthing i cant have my friends hurtin and not knowin why you know what i mean


  • Ramona Wright
    February 4, 2007

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    I really like this T. Its very different and good. I hope its not about you and Dargon. Cus that would suck. And he seems like a very lovely guy. Keep up the great work big sister.