Kneeling in pain
Needing to feel more
Intensity never before reached
Gritting his teeth
His flesh flayed from the bone
Taking more without a cry
In-between it all
Naked thoughts hurt worse
Slices on his wrists refuse to bleed
Helping never hurt so bad
Insult to injury
Never taking the right path
Indebted to the darkness
Neither pain will lessen
God turns his back
Anger courses through the boy
Rage like he’s never felt
Making every attack hurt less
Onward he cuts
Relinquishing to the lie
. Knight my ass
A contest entry
- Show me pure loneliness and pain by ThunderCatWonder08.
390 points, ended March 13, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - KNIGHTS AND THEIR FAIR LADIES by Whispering Wind.
1000 points, ended March 11, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Brave to the bitter end ,even unto death
eath with honor.A great poem!!!!
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awwwww hun wonderful write as always i love it but brother you are my knght you help me so much and i love you for that you are a good person no matter what you think you are *hugs* im always here for you
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oh the description is great i understand your point great job xxlorren
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