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solstice

the burying season begins.

what sins shall we carry in
the smell of earth
the gemini twins
bones and blood and bondage again.




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  • Star Shine gold member
    May 14

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    Wow. the rhythm is awe-inspiring. Solstic is a somber subject to start with. Good depth in few well-chosen words.

  • Ellis gold member
    November 24, 2007

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    Holy Black Cat

    What did you have for breakfast?
    Getting away from YOU real fast!
    You be spooky girl hyacinthgirl
    You're as nuts as collection of squirrel

     

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  • lkcl gold member
    February 8, 2007
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    dear hyacinth, this poem is so simple, and so harsh. it hints at a great deal. love it.


  • darkknight marellus
    February 5, 2007
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    Huh....Usually I don't like short stuff, because they usually fail to deliver what we want as the reader. You seem to do pretty well, although you kind of keep it open and don't really give a finish....
    Still, it's pretty good.
    Akasha