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Trapped

Trapped
creatures that hind in the dark
they can't see
but they will hunt you down
biting your neck
millions of them
crawing on the walls
Trapped
In this cave
with my friends and those
Creatures
no way out
Trapped

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  • HoldMe
    February 4, 2007

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    mwahahahaha. deliciously wonderful. reminds me of the movie The Descent...which it probably is supposed to sound like. either way I loved it.