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A Tidbit Of Trouble.

I found a tiny snippet in the trash,

with script in her fine handwriting applied,

it said "I'm leaving for some  oth  r  g  y!"

The paper was all blurred from coffee stains,

my heart stood still, my true love now was gone.

I called up all her friends, to no avail,

they said she wasn't there, try so and so.

Depressed I fell in tears upon the couch,

but suddenly the door lock made a noise,

she came in with a bag and a bright smile,

and said,"They had no broth, but I got gravy."

so we'll have the turkey, scratch the chicken soup.

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  • Angel Full Of Hurt
    October 11, 2007

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    hmmm not bad

    wow thanks for entering my contest, thanks for entering this piece..and i'll look at your other works soon =) keep this up!