Suffocating under the pressure of your distaste
The oblivion that leaves me alive
Under the scrutiny of family and friends
The only witness of my useless love
Plunging into the deception of this vulgar facade
The perfection of my hellish nightmare
Unleashed into my soul
As i emerge unscathed from the plundering wilderness
Fated for loneliness
And dying from the emptiness
You scorn leaves my body breathless
Without love I die
Without you I live
A contest entry
- the real valentines day contest : cause real love hurts by ISheHer.
470 points, ended February 23, 2007, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Amaze Me! by Shantalina.
550 points, ended February 27, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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this is harsh in a way! Wow.
Without love I die
Without you I live
I love it. Thanks for entering!
SAE
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