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Soccer

My feet pound upon the grass
Players dash across the field
Hoping to gain the advantage
My adrenaline pumps
As I near my objective
The ball ricochets between my feet
Feet fly
Opponents trying to stop my advance
The clock ticks
Counting down
It is a race against time
My leg swings

Contact

The ball arcs

Hands reach

Cheers erupt

Sweet Victory

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  • Espantapajaros
    February 16, 2007

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    My fist impression is that it is the reality. When you're in that position with your team on the field it is sweet.

  • goalsv
    February 3, 2007
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    Very Good! Nice way to describe a soccer game. It took me back to when I played.

    • willowprincess
      February 4, 2007
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      thanks, not sure where this came from since i don't really like to play soccer at all. but i do like to watch my school's women's team play. it was just really ramdom.