You say I don't hide it?
How wrong you are
The tear you see is one in a million
The aftermath of two hours ago
Don't be nice to me
Don't be mean to me
Leave me alone
But don't forget me
I am a powder keg
A chloroplast
A reaction ready to happen
The energy doesn't give me life
It kills me
Author notes
I wrote this a while ago, and it's about the only good poem I have written in the past two months.
Please tell me what you think
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Kick-Ass
Yet another good poem I've read of yours........You got style babe
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That last stanza is really good. Maybe it's just my inner dork, but I loves it.
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You and me gotta talk girlfren...you know theres an indisputable truth that only those that really love really hurt...so I know youre a really beautiful person because the hurts there in your poems. Some of us hurt because of what another or others have done to us (like me)
and then there are those...who wake up to darkness FOR NO DAMN REASON (like me)...
ITS SO UNFAIR!!!...
I've prayed to be dull and unfeeling hoping that that meant the end to my suffering...it never happened. Now, having survived (myself) looking back... I realise I was gifted with the ability to 'feel'...not everyone is. Sometimes we think we need permission to feel good and even then it seems like its someone elses party we've gatecrashed.
YOU FEEL!...and that means you can feel fan bloody tastic too...
like I say...not everyone can.
Your poetry kicks ass
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Oh, wow. I haven't gotten a comment like that in a while. In fact, I haven't really gotten a comment in a while.... I am glad you like my poems! YEY! *does little happy dance* Gah! My mind is kind of mush right now, so I can't write a good reply to the AWSOME comment you left me.
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