I set free the dove my heart
To take refuge in your eyes’ sky;
Where eternity is slept
In a velvet dream.
When sunset nestles in your eyes,
I’ll get a sunrise; so sincere
A repetition on your kindness.
I gaze at Night Stars
The golden gates to enter
Such magnificent heart
The treasure of old myths.
I join my wandering eyes
To your blinking Night Star
A fantasy creature
Galloping in thoughts’ fields
Then all I can release are kisses
Oh my dear!
Kisses on your eyes
When it sheds crystalline dews
Kisses on your eyes
When smiles decorate them
Kisses on your eyes
For ever and ever
Author notes
Option#8
For my arab sister, Nooni; one of the first people who welcomed me on AP and touch me with their kind words and heart. My Nooni has a unicorn part as Night Star but I love both parts of her since they make my sister.
http://allpoetry.com/NooNiThEWitcH
A contest entry
- OPTIONS FOR EVERYONE!!! by NooNiThEWitcH.
425 points, ended March 8, 2007, 28 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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well this is written by my AP sis to my AP sweetest friend so whatever i say it would be soooooooo subjective but Massy as usual whatever u right is as beautiful as ur soul keep on penning and if Nada didnt give u d gold trophy i'll kick her ass lol
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WOW! I Love this! It is very beautiful. Did not expect my eyes to produce such a lovely poem!
Amazing choice of words and beauty! I'm speechless!
Thank you so much for entering my contest and good luck!
Nooni
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As always, well written.
Massy, This is so wonderful..the images you portray lead a heart to romantic wonderment....auntie
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Bravo!
Great poem! Full of imagery and emotion. Well chosen content and flow. Makes a write everyone enjoys. Don
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