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In the Darkness


"Come along, my Darling..." His voice hardly above a whisper as he took her hand in his. Such beauty illuminated from her - as if Heaven bathed her in Holy light.

She stepped quietly closer, letting him lead her through the darkness as the yellow moon shown dimly through the night.

They moved silently, walking quickly as the first few snow flakes began to fall,

They slipped through the gate and she pulled herself closer to him as they stepped into the hall.

"Quiet now, the others sleep..." His mouth brushed hers softly as he spoke,

She felt a shiver of excitement as her body awoke.

A smile crossed his lips as she promised to be quiet and intertwined her fingers in his, pulling him closer still.

They shared a deep kiss as she pushed one leg between his, her heart racing with a dark thrill.

Just one caress of his fingertips against her skin and she seemed to melt

Her heartbeat echoed all the passion she felt,

As he moved one hand against her thighs, unfastening the leather pants that hugged her slender form

She sighed into his open mouth, slipping her hands beneath his clothing - her hands cold, his body warm...

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Just a little start to a fun story poem. Going to be a good one I think.

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  • Love-EroticPoet
    January 21, 2008
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    I love the image, and the lure of wanting to know more of what happens. very nice.


  • Desire gold member
    October 24, 2007
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    Wow!!

    Wowzers~~ once I started...I was at the edge of my seat
    Wonderful piece You penned and this got the blood boiling~~~

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
    Keep that quill dancing

    Best wishes to You Sweet Soul!
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Dalden
    February 7, 2007
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    B-E-A-Utiful piece and I can't wait to see the finished piece. You and Damian have a very passionate outlook and so I am stoked to see this done and the imagery is fan-damn-tastic. Sexy and smokin' as Hell
    -Dalden


  • Blueskywonder
    February 5, 2007

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    This is a very sensual piece of poetry which i sort of smoothly flowed through.A very nice piece with enticing imagery and sensual erotic content.Well done and thyankyou for sharing.


  • GirlyLissa
    February 3, 2007
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    Can't wait until it's done

    I was sucked in as soon as I started reading! Can't wait to finish.

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