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Love, the selfish emotion...

Love is blinding, that's what they say...
But love is so much more than that,

Everyone knows love also has a bad side,

Somewhere deep in the darkest corner,

where only those can come, who are brave enough to live through their hearts...
But why didn't they tell me?
Why didn't they tell me that love could steal my heart,
that love can make it go from gold... to cold,
Why didn't they warn me how it's unpredictable one moment,

but the next you know exactly what's coming...

 

When love is filling your heart,

you don't feel how lonely you actually are...

But when it's all over,

your heart can fill up with other things again...

'Cause every time you are in love ,

Your heart grows a bit,

And every time the love seeps out,

You feel more and more alone...

So, I guess love is blinding,

But even more it is surpressing other feelings,

Love is like a drug... maybe it should be illiegal...

because love is a selfish emotion...

 

 

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  • unanswered
    February 13, 2007

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    Wow. I really enjoyed this. No one warned me either. I love the part "every time the love seeps out, you feel more and more alone". Its about life and love. I like this very much.

  • Thedragonisgone
    February 4, 2007

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    Well done, my dear! a satisfying rant on the perils of love. I really like the idea that every time you fall in love your heart grows so that's why you feel even more empty when love has seeped out 'cause there's more empty space - and it would seem clear enough to reason that it's more difficult to fall in love again because it will take more to fill the heart... just my ramblings at 5 a.m.
    don't mind me.
    Best wishes for the contest.


  • Poetry and I Inc
    February 4, 2007
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    Impressive, and gave me a new light from which 2 view life and love at once. U posed such a poignant view and gave much insight 2 poem. Gr8 job and I'm looking forward 2 reading more from u! -theQueen"


  • ThunderCatWonder08
    February 3, 2007

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    good

    This is more of a love poem your right it dosnt go with either my choices but hey this is a really deep write i feel you on this good job xxlorren**