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*~ Ultimate Power *~

 

 

“Strike me down, and I shall become more powerful
than you can possibly imagine..."
- Obi Wan (Star Wars)



Savor the thought of possible victory
and cast foam pebbles into barren sea
for serpents rise with hoods extended,
venom targets innocent eyes pretended.

Blink when questions lash the alter ego
after remarks made in haste like a tornado
ripped through confines secured with dead bolts,
tried to pillage my Spirit with warped insults.

This Temple that stands before you strong
with pillars of concrete you tried to wrong,
witnessed morbid frenzy in a stone Heart
which your body harbored since birth to start.

Generosity has been taken advantage of once
but only because of Love and Light balance.
Your ideas of my destruction will falter quick,
Higher Powers observe a time bomb you mimick.

Inside this frame rests the Phoenix in slumber
and Universal Power at my fingertips I encumber.
On one knee, bent from a strike by your actions
will summon every Deity with a fateful reaction.

There’s reason as to why my presence is known
to bring Happiness on this path I’ve been shown.
You don’t know me and never will in this Lifetime,
you have no idea how high my Kundalini can climb.

Every move you make, energies follow in tow
while whispered incantations you loudly echo.
Don’t ever smite me Mortal with your seven ways
as Karma will make its home your darkest days.

Revenge or Hate does not seep in my veins ever
nor will my docile personality change like weather.
Remember that my feet tread lightly on Earth’s soil,
the likes of you won’t make my blood run cold or boil.

Hold onto every prayer-request at wake and bedtime
for I forgive easily the nature of each crime
yet Guardians that encircle my entire being
guarantee justice served which you’d be experiencing.


  



 

Author notes

Option Quote:
“Strike me down, and I shall become more powerful than you can possibly imagine..."
- Obi Wan (Star Wars)

Chose Option4-
I put the quote at the beginning so the verse
is evident as to the meaning...
Love and Light
Harm None...allow the perpetrator
to judge & sentence self..
reap consequences of actions...
Some people become their *own*
worst enemy...Mind, Body & Spirit

Seven ways reference:
Seven Deadly Sins
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Seven_deadly_sins

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  • Amazing this is! Wow - I can feel the power of these words when I read them, very strong!
    Leaves me a bit nervous though teehee, makes me feel like "Beware!"

    Wicked Poem I likes

    Amber


  • Puppydog gold member
    May 22

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    SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!

    What everyone should always believe, no matter how others may hurt or slander ones faith and beliefs will bring them through and keep their heart strong.


  • Midnight-x-Rose
    December 21, 2007
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    The wording here is magnificent, very beautiful and advanced language. I haven't heard the quote before as I haven't watched star wars, but I suppose in some ways humans can be like that too, we can gain strength from others hurt towards us. Very well written.

  • sidewinder silver member
    December 19, 2007

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    once again I'm awed at your skill as as a writer!


    *does the bow as In ted's and bill excellent adventure*
    I'm not worthy!
    I'm not worthy!
    Wonderful work my friend!

    Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
    Bill


  • Swan song gold member
    December 8, 2007
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    This was another awesome write that was very well versed you are just too much goodnees lovely


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    October 10, 2007

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    WOW!!!!!!!!!

    Desire
    This piece is breath-taking
    I was in a suspenful trance while reading your brilliant words. Powerful and the thoughts of casting power spells for the good is perfect. I love the begining quote and the images. They fit the poem to pure perfection. i love the entire poem but find the following stanzas OUTSTANDING!!!!!

    "There’s reason as to why my presence is known
    to bring Happiness on this path I’ve been shown.
    You don’t know me and never will in this Lifetime,
    you have no idea how high my Kundalini can climb.

    Every move you make, energies follow in tow
    while whispered incantations you loudly echo.
    Don’t ever smite me Mortal with your seven ways
    as Karma will make its home your darkest days.

    Revenge or Hate does not seep in my veins ever
    nor will my docile personality change like weather.
    Remember that my feet tread lightly on Earth’s soil,
    the likes of you won’t make my blood run cold or boil"

    VERY WELL PENNED!!!!!!!!
    Thank you entering our Spell Casting Party and I wish you the very best in the contest!

    David


  • anaisnais
    September 20, 2007

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    This poem is so true, we can get so locked up in self importance at times breading hatred and writhing within. Instead we should learn to forgive, forget and be able to move on in peace. Well done.

  • mrajarams
    July 28, 2007

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    It is unbelievable that this poem did not fetch you the trohy. But dont worry dear, from this poem, you should have won millions of poetic minds and this lovable heart. The flow is incredible and the rhyme is superlative. I would be honoured by your visit to my page to stamp your impressions on my poems.

  • DarkHunter
    April 28, 2007

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    Wow I can't believe you didn't win a trophy for this, judge needs their head read. This is an awesome poem, it flows so effortlessly that I didn't even realise it was a rhyming poem until reading others comments.
    James.


  • Fallen forever silver member
    April 26, 2007

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    Brillinat quote, it really pulled it together
    It's a quote my mum used to say to me and my siblings when we were being picked on at school, and every time we heard it we walked around with the ultimate power!

    You got that kind of essence in the poem
    I loved the hints all the way throguh and the thousands of referances

    Like the seven deadly sins *licks lips*
    They facinate me

    Well done, another fantastic piecefrom none other than my friendly APhood poet


    Much love and light


  • grannyeri gold member
    March 4, 2007

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    What an impressive poem this is - great rhythm and rhyme, flow and such a great presentation as well. Never much into Star Wars, but this was so ineresting, might have to watch some of them.

  • poetryality silver member
    February 28, 2007

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    Oh my dear Brilliant poet. You have summoned words of genius and great wisdom with this stellar poem. There are lines here that ignite the spirit and denounce the villians of evil. I love the way you shunned the enemy with words that should educate him/her/it into knowing that they have no place to touch you. Your shield stands erect and strong dear heart. You are protected by forces that cannot be reckoned with. This is brilliant and so worthy of merit. I wish you the best in the challenge.

    "May the force be with you"... always.


    All My Love ♥

    Grandma


  • Yawgmoth
    February 20, 2007

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    Brilliant as always

    Dearest Mother,
    I feel I must appologize for not being able to get a hold of you sooner but my internet hasn't been working well. I am sorry that it seems I have been avoiding everyone but it's not that I simply haven't had time to be on and my connections just began to work. Please forgive me for my abcense I hope to be more regular from now on.
    Yours- Yawgmoth


  • cheetahliou
    February 13, 2007
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    Hopeiness

    I love this poem mom a give you 10,00 millon claps
    I hope you get a gold


    • Desire gold member
      February 13, 2007
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      Wow You are giving me that many claps...

      that is a lot...
      Wooooooooo hoooooooooooo
      Thank You my little munchkin
      Love You
      and more love~Mommy

  • Almighty Aphrodite gold member
    February 7, 2007

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    Truly inspiring, but with an admonishment I think everyone should heed. I have never been so moved with any quote as I think you have here, with this poem, with a multifaceted jewel that shows both strength of character and an equanimity few people possess. (Most people would be screaming bloody murder should anyone wrong them--it is difficult not to accept someone perpetrating evil to you without wanting to take revenge). I think this should be promoted, because it could lift the spirits of many--and ward away all the bad apples. Well done, dear daughter!



    Many blessings,

    Raven Aurora ("Momma")


  • maa gold member
    February 6, 2007

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    a truly beautiful and very inspiring poem which stresses on the sovereignty of gentleness and inner strength over externally demonstrated power ...

    "Revenge or Hate does not seep in my veins ever
    nor will my docile personality change like weather.
    Remember that my feet tread lightly on Earth’s soil,
    the likes of you won’t make my blood run cold or boil."

    you show as that
    Love is stronger than hatred ...
    Humility stronger than pride ...
    Gentleness stronger than violence ...
    Equanimity stronger than reactivity ...

    thank you,

    maa


  • GlimpseOfPerfection
    February 3, 2007

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    A very good write! The rhyming isn't forced which gives you major points in my eyes.

    Thanks for entering, Good Luck!!

  • Heavenly Angel
    February 3, 2007

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    A totally EXCELLENT write, my friend! I wish you all the very best in this contest! This is an awesome write!
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