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Find me, please

Find me, please...

Look right through my fake smiles...

Search for the truth in my eyes...

And distrust my words, please...

But if you find me,

Never question a lost dreamer...

Your words hurt me too much...

Just talk with your eyes, please...

A contest entry

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  • Poetry and I Inc
    February 4, 2007

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    Interesting and short! Good job. Has a 'begging' essence which adds 2 poem. Hope 2 read more from u again soon. -theQueen"


  • deadcolor dreams
    February 3, 2007

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    I made it a rule to have it left aligned, I think I shall remind you.

    I like this- lose the ellipses, and this is a good overall poem. Thanks for choosing to enter.

    ~Lindsay