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Haiku

Apples

Apples are nasty,
They get stuck between your teeth
They are gross and bland
-shiningstars-


Apples

So crisp and juicy
Apple pie and applesauce
Red, Green, and yellow
-midnight waves-


Berries

Blueberries are sweet
Strawberries are delicious
I love these fruits!
-shiningstars-


Pineapple

Sharp on the outside
Juicy and mellow inside
Pineapple is great!
-midnight waves-

Author notes

My friend rain and I wrote these all last year, and I just found them when I was cleaning up.

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  • soccerjazzy7
    July 27, 2007

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    all i can say is wow...i remember writing those. i still have mine, but i don't think i'll ever post them. these were very good and if you don't mind me saying, funny! (in a good way)
    ~JP~


  • -shiningstars-
    March 31, 2007
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    haha wow

    i cannot believe you found these! wow i suck at haikus


  • ObliviousReality
    March 19, 2007

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    Very confused!! Theyre good. I would say cute? But I'm not sure if that's what I'm looking for. I'm slightly confused. Were they just all put together so you wouldn't have to make seperate pages for each, or did they all go together? Being fruit an all. Still enjoyed it. Short and fun to read. Good job!


    • foofina
      March 20, 2007
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      THANKS!

      Well, me and my friend had a school assignment to write haiku, and while walking around our school campus we just kept coming up with random haiku and we wrote them down. Later, I found them and decided to post them for further comments.