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I'll do anything

I want to shout aloud
scream out to everyone
Im falling for you
yet you cant see this part of me

Im crazy about you
yet you shrug and blow that fact away
for i will do anything
all you have to do is ask

your words reamain un spoken
you wont tell me what i can or should do
i want to know, i can prove to you
i wont hurt you

just have to give me a chance
I'll do anything just to hold you in my arms
let this day pass by slowly
as i want to be with you and only you

I want to shout aloud
scream out to everyone
Im falling for you
yet you cant see this part of me

I will let you see
how crazy i am for you
but that scares me to open up
because that gives me a chance to get hurt
when you dump me i lash out

because part me dies each time you say goodbye
now i feel your loosing interest in me
im slowly fading

I want to shout aloud
scream out to everyone
Im falling for you
yet you cant see this part of me

your foolish your going to loose me yet
you dont see that each time you push me away
but yet i care so much
Id do anything just for you

tell me to leave ill go
tell me stay ill stay
but if you dont say what you want
how will i know what to do

if you care chase after me
tell me not to leave
im just overreacting
ive been away from you for over a week

part me is hurting
but its hard because you seem to not care
whats the rush
does it matter if your with another

you ask that i just.....
died a little more inside because of course it matters
whether you want to believe me or not i do fucking care

so when you act like i dont exist
or brush me aside a part of me dies
im afraid
im panicking

ill wait but i have to know
if you loose me will you care?
will you chase after me?
or are you over me

i need reasurence i need to now do you like me
because i want to tell you and show you that i care

I want to shout aloud
scream out to everyone
Im falling for you
yet you cant see this part of me

just know i'll do anything for you

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  • PersephoneInWinter
    February 3, 2007

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    i will comment no matter what you say, because you are my sugar faerie cousin

    breakups suck. first you are filled with all this love and happiness, but.then.it.all.washes.away.

    this should be a song, its filled with great poetic devices, and with some instruments and all, this would be a killer song.

    i hope that everything goes ok sweetie!

    <333333333


    • ThunderCatWonder08
      February 3, 2007
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      ok haha u commented but u have a right to ur my fav cuzin ahh of course im ur fav we all have to love me

      it washes away fast then i hurts u get mad then sad then ewk... hate men be better off as a lesbianed id make a hot one too
      yeah yeah make it into some sailormoony song with power true love then sad breakups and waht not lol thanks cuz much love***xxlorren

  • ThunderCatWonder08
    February 3, 2007

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    ok so this is quite annoying i hate relationships bc of the drama men need to comunicate just a lil better plz dont comment on this poem first one ive written since well been bout 6 months just writing my emotions out dont bother dont try to comment plz.....thanks i guess xxlorren