sexy sadie they called her
with her pout of lip
& hips that swayed notions
yet she felt uptight
by tight button breasts
& I taught her well
that they were sweet
as cherry tomatoes
by suckling
one whole
& humming
letting the vibe
resonate
til she came
like my marionette
twitching
& screaming my name
re naming me mercy
oh mercy...
ample alicia confided
sadness at being so endowed
I poured custard
across warmth of pillows
& fast-lapped
til each drop
had disappeared
as she mewed like a kitten
til she became primal
cat screeching
beseeching me
no please
please oh
don't stop
& I taught her
every inch was worthy
of desire
Deirdre had a hang up
as her twin peaks
were slightly different sizes
& I cupped one hand on one
& circled my tongue
around the nipple
like a teat teasing
rolling & shaping
& pleasured
them both
at the same time
I taught her
both breasts
deserved the same attention
& she begged me
begged me
to teach her again...
Irma, ahh she had inverted nipples
& was never able to make love
& feel complete
I lay her across my lap
& spanked her white moon
til it fleshed pink
turned her over
& blew & licked quick
quick quicker
& then circling
those dimpled breasts
she rose for me
arching
crying for me
& I nipped gently
teasing with teeth
& taught her
they were her trophy's
& mine too
maisie was a mom
who felt breasts hung low
& refused to be bedded
without a bra
I brought her red silk
blouse
making her wear
nothing underneath
& suckled her
through the material
til she called me bitch
& still I hoovered her
until she ripped blouse off
craving to have skin touched
& I taught her
she was all woman
& fed my appetite
it's not such a bad job
being a sex therapist
I teach women
to feel
divine
& enjoy pleasure
not measured
by anything
as they leave smiling
I always remember to say
" thanks for the mammaries"
A contest entry
- Boobs! by The Journey Begins.
375 points, ended February 10, 2007, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Comically Lousy Erotica by Mercury Rising.
550 points, ended June 19, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Ironically, this is way too well-written to be bad, but was actually really funny none-the-less. I hope that was part of your intentions, and if you're a girl, this piece is even more clever.
Breast of lick in my contest.
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Wow I know I have read this before...its a very good piece...I never for get good reads...thank you for entering...Novy
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did you write this
omg goodness you are quite the brainstormer honey i think you should write like this more often this poem can be great for all range women high self esteem low self esteem but i fall in the high 
i think you know that i don't think you could be my therapist could you be i need a repairing dear goodness. bold as i am i couldn't tell you half my wild side you may pass out in shock death
i shall add this to my list i love it i knew i loved your poetry for a reason
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As if...
Blushes...yes I write like this now and then...and I wouldn't be so precocious as to apply to be any kind of therapist for you hon...it's cool that you have high self esteem...too many women are not liberted like that but feel confined within being compartmentalized...this is just an adult way of saying focus on the sensation and not negation...thankyou for reading and mercy me if you ever told me all of your wild side I have no doubt I'd feel like a passing out parade lmao
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Whatcha trying to do to me girl.....
your letin out the obvious secret,
we all know ya gals just need us to get the wee ones...
my obsolete Johnson hangs his head so low , his helmet feel off.
Cant you gals find something useful to do with our neanderthal extensions....
i could stand in your corner ,
you can hang your hat on my excitement as you enter your office...just gotta let me watch.....lol.
Very wild
wild child.
See there are some uses for my protrusion..
this entire response was written with no hands....lol
Much love ,
Liam
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Excellent
Excellent write. I'll have to reread it, perhaps several times
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boobs indeed, that was so thoughtfully clever, In the least perverted way possible too , which might be me thinking that way because you're a woman anyway, still, such grace even in the most off-beat of topics, and my does that word use never cease to amaze me...before i start repeating every comment i make to you I'm gonna start applauding you only because I'm sure you know how talented you are
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BRAVO! I cannot critique this in any way, shape or form ... you have touched on a few of the insecurities that women have about their breasts and have made them more woman than they thought possible! You have taken erotic and made it sensual without taking anything away from the eroticism of it (does that make sense to you?!)
I very rarely give a write 3 claps, but this is deserving of more than three ... well done on an EXCELLENT write!!! I am truly impressed!
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well you did give me what i wanted.. this was a little different, you're a boobie man aren't you? yeah, we established that fact.. anyways, i like boobs, but not that much, you're a little wild with the descriptions. personally, i think you enjoyed writing it more than the reader enjoyed reading it, but im not saying i didn't enjoy it, it was just different from my taste.
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Wow sex therapist maybe i could be one no serious...but i like this poem because you made women feel good about themselves and really noone needs a man to make them feel good but hey it doenst hurt to try...i like your poem still though
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gee yvette...yer makin my pecs hard lol...hows bout a poem called THANKS FER THE MANNERIES
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tongue in cheek....I've never read a sex therapist poem for large busted ladies....kind of appealed to me on the basis of my primal male tendencies maybe,although I felt each character represented sorrow and indecision maybe reflecting the narrator's own views, not sure because you cleverly used the voice to maintain erotic and feeling within each of the solutions; I feel this is a poem about confidance, and especially in a time of size 0s and catwalk skeletal celebrities maybe this like the 'Kate Winslet' of poems, one for the women who are curvier and perhaps more 'awkward' feeling in their supposedly imperfect bodies maybe? Whatever the actual statement intended the poem comes across as a kind of private thought session meets liberation of the psyche, which pays compliment to the fictional sex therapist's approach to her profession, kind of libido raising acts maybe? (Unless you are a sex therapist in real life?!?!?!). I don't think it was overly long,the short sentence structure turns the line breaks quicker so the poem's segments unfold not laboriously some of these people should read the epics then come back and read this, if they are still awake. Unique poem, perhaps not a poem of my outright tastes but I like the way it was written and the take and style. Well done.
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What a great write. Full of such imagination with a funny ending. In my opinion I think you should remove the "and" symbols. I read it without them and it works so much better to me anyway. The symbols were just distracting but all in all a great write. Well done. Keep them coming and blessed be.
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This had a very funny ending to go along with the funny title. What an unsuspected twist! Good luck!
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Such an odd poem, so different from some of your past stuff I have read. I find the fascination quite odd, but hey, it sure does lead to some amazing poetry. Thanks for the fascinating, if somewhat confusing, read.
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very well done
you bring the subject matter to life in all of its diversity nuance and humor... outstanding
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That was so ridiculous it was awesome. Very creative too. Good juob on this poem
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Happy Happy
Everyone is happy! Didn't know at first where this was going but sure liked the ending when we got there. Actually enjoyed the entire poem cuz I like Boobs too. So imagery was great and wording is captive of the reader's mind and curiosity. Penned a wonderful poem here my friend, Don
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As a poem, I must say the approach to the topic was unique and the technique you used to display it was even more unique. - Well done . I too felt it was maybe a verse too long but it was so entertaining that i didn't really care.
It is unfortunate how much we humans depend upon the opinions of others to create our own self-esteem - something that is readily reinforced in the United States media (commercials, movies, magazines).
Too those women who suffer from this social abuse may I suggest that your diamonds are not appreciated because those looking are uninformed! Ignorance has poor eyesight.
One Love,
John
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lol...oh, my god...this is precious. If you don't win, I swear to God I will stomp my feet and shout at the heavens. lol Lane
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The title is excellent and there are some very fine lines in this. I felt it was over-long and became a little repetitive, especially after I came.
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Absolutely Brilliant!
I am truly in awe...this was simply brilliant...I suspect as only a woman could accomplish! Makes my piece a limerick, and I willingly step back, bow my head in honest honor to you, and hope you take the gold! My compliments! What fun! Thanks for the mammaries! Priceless! You take care. Tom
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Very Creative
I had to read this one just because the title was appropriate. The poem did the title justice in a big way.
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mammaries
Bit difficult for me to comprehend completely because I am a man, but that last line is hilarious. Was a real super dooper flopper stopper! Fun poem. -
You are so boobiful to me LOL This got me in, (sucker lol) from the beginning and 'doh' never got it until the delightful end, awesome job!
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Yvette . . . what a marvelous piece of work this is!!! You mysterious, most beautiful variation of women never cease to amaze me . . . I love this!!!
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boobilicious!
sorry i can't write more i am giggling too much from that last line!
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