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Snowing

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                              Today is snowy,
                  Tiny ice crystals are gently floating to earth,
                    They look like minature falling stars,
                              Each one unique,
  As they softly touch the ground, they shimmer in the morning sunlight,
                  It's a beautiful, yet blinding sight,
    I gaze in amazement at how the snowflakes can look so much alike,
                        And stil be so different.

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The stars at the top are supposed to be snowflakes.

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  • Svs-lover2012
    July 24, 2007

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    I like the snowflakes before the poem and the poem is so true about how every snowflake is unique. Good write