Luscious dreams I can't remember
Open fields now beginning to wither away
Silver horns atop a unicorn's forehead
Time to open your eyes and see.
For so long now, I wait for that one
One to take my heart and hold it with care
Repairing the bumps, bruises, and cuts along its edges.
Shining dreams gone, now a reality
Only so I can finally fully understand where I stand
Lonely days now gone because I have him
One who understands me for who I am.
Never will I hold on to fake dreams that will never come true
Going on and learning what it means to have hope for us all.
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I commented on poems by LilMrsAttitude, speakingup4kids, and DenyMyLove.
It's sort of a mix of everything for my baby, Carmine. It's the first poem I've actually written FOR HIM. I read it to him last night and he loved it...
A contest entry
- If You Want Comments... by RT michaels.
335 points, ended February 13, 2007, 106 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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very beautiful poem. It becomes even prettier on the fact of knowing you wrote it (and read it) to you child. That is so very sweet. The opening line of the poem is so strong and so beautiful, it trumps the rest of the poem (not a bad thing). Such a great write, thank you for the entry and good luck.
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When I wrote, to my baby, I meant that it was to my boyfriend, but thank you for the comment. I do hope you have a fun time judging the contest.
Much love, Ashleigh
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Baby, you've wrote quite a few nice poems in the past, and ones that always be memerable. But this one, above all else, will stay with me in my heart forever, a spot it will share only with you.
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Thank you, love. You don't know how much that means to me. And hopefully, in due time, I will get you to write something, whether it be for me or not. I got the ass to write some things for me... why can't I get you to? XP Heh, I love you with all my heart and so much more.
*Kisses.* Love, Me.
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