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Lost between worlds

Laughing, happy or hysterical
Ostrasized or welcomed with open arms.
Silently screaming, or smiling
Tearing,
     
tearing,

torn in two.

    Lost between worlds

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  • Epona
    March 6, 2007

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    brief but sharp and porwerful- how you can swing between two emotions which dont seem to make sense together
    E~


  • Findecano
    February 4, 2007

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    Ooo! Liking the poem greatly, I love the line "Silently Screaming, or Smiling.."
    Hugs for ya, keep up the great writting SL..


  • darkspiritonline
    February 3, 2007

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    oooooooooooooooooooh pretty poem...

    My favourite line:"Lost between worlds" which is also the title...but yeah... SHHH!!!

    Very nice short poem, and liking the chosen background to ^_^
    and the "Tearing,
    tearing,
    torn in two."
    give the poem a sense of a time scale, I can imagine the shredding taking place in my mind....very powerful.
    And a very good write.

    Hmm running out of things to think of... Brain has died...so will ediet or add more later... okay ^_^
    Hugs and sorry SL.