How do you get it?
Where does it come from
Never seen it
Can't get some
Hide in a closet
In a dark room
Close the door
Lock it too
Still can't get it
Don't know how
Find the way
Find it now
Go for a walk
No that won't do
Visit a friend
That failed too
I finally found it
Right before my eyes
Everyone is sleeping
But no not I
Peace and Quiet
Mine to cherish
Savor this moment
Never let it perish
A contest entry
- Poetic Idol (Auditions) by TwilightBloodRuns.
315 points, ended June 8, 2008, 31 entries
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quite a catching bit of poetry, and I agree with the previous comment, the end is great.
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BlackThorn138
thank you for your comment when this was written my family was trying to drive me crazy and i was trying to write poetry and it was written in an angry moment although it does not sound angry it really surprised me I actually did all the things in the poem and when it was quiet everyone was asleep except the insomniac of the household ---me thanks again for your comment
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BRAVO :)
"Mine to cherish
Savor this moment
Never let it perish"
I love these lines! this is a BEAUTIFUL poem, how i find peace is i sit under my willow tree, it is calming there. or just laying and watching the sunset gives me (and most people) IMMENSE peace...great job!!!
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