Got me a long ladder
and leaned it against
the side of the house
Once I am standing on
the rooftop, I will then
yell, with outstretched
arms, that she's my heart's
one and only true love
If I should jump down, off
of this steep gutter's edge,
I will fall into her arms. I
know she'll catch me, as they
are always open and ready for me
I fell in love with her, fell into
those eyes, those arms, that heart,
that beats for me, that's where I exist
I love those eyes
I love those lips
I love those arms
I love you........
I am hopelessly romantic
I am hopelessly devoted
I am hopelessly in love with you
In a list
A contest entry
- Valentines day pre-writes quicky by Entwining Beauty.
600 points, ended February 20, 2008, 12 entries
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900 points, ended February 14, 2008, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - L.O.V.E!!!! by Condemd RyeZing.
555 points, ended February 27, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Enter All Your Love Writes Here! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
300 points, ended March 8, 2008, 306 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Fantastic!
ah yes, the things we do for love... Such fantasy, I find myself screaming inside, "Jump, Jump! Jump into the arms of the woman you love!"
YES
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This is such a sweet write. I feel your words, I really do. I love the casualness of your words throughout and yet how they are full of meaning.
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wow. truly emotional and captivating. thank you for entering.
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very nice poem. glad to have been in the contest with you.
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Excellent!!
Funny, sweet, and just all out adorable...great job with this, and be careful with that ladder....LOL
Thank you for his entry, and have a Happy Valentine's Day!
Jin
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sweet write Good luck
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