One day more has gone awry
I can't take anymore, one more trick to try
One more pill to ease my pain
to bring peace to my troubled brain
A sigh of relief comes from my lips
I do enjoy my mental trips
soon I will be away from this place
A place that is mine with no familiar face
but something is wrong, all I see is a light
I try to look away, but I soon lose this fight
no more will I return to my hopes and dreams
I have ruined myself for good it seems
I look down to the floor and see myself
the colored pills had fallen from the shelf
nobody will question what happened to me
They will know I died trying to be happy
A contest entry
- 24 hours... or 20 entries... #1 by Namita.
300 points, ended February 5, 2007, 12 entries
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yea. this was very well written, i liked it very much.
my favorite line was " They will know i dies trying to be happy " very emotional and very powerful
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if trying to be happy kills me, i will stay sad. naw--i just won't let it kill me. you wrote this well and i wish you the best of luck in this contest we both have entered. viyanna rosemarie
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