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meant.to.be.is.a.LIE].(x)

I Can Still Remember::

    Your hand on my hand
    Your lips on my lips

    The way you whispered in my ear
    Fragments;;
        &&
              "i love you"
             
                    "you are so.beautiful"

   
    ((First[Last]Love))

    You said I was a.ma.zing
    You promised to love me for.ever
    You said I was special

    You were younger
          && I never cared

    [[But everything becomes an excuse
          when heartache turns to heartbreak]]


    When we were young, l.o.♥.e. [always] meant
          DE.VO.TION

          [[but everything changes soon enough]]


    I haven't heard/seen/loved you since November.

    [And I'm So.Sorry.]

Author notes

I'm not sure where he's gone.

[[but i know it's all my fault]]

eughh. I hate this.

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  • noir eyes
    February 4, 2007

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    [[But everything becomes an excuse
    when heartache turns to heartbreak]]

    faavvvorite line ever. aweeesommmeee. mmyup.
    im really sorry about whatever happened. =[
    cheer up, okay babycakes?
    luff yew like whoa. ♥
    im here if you ever needa vent =]


    • ohemeegeeay
      February 5, 2007

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      "luff yew like whoa."

      Okay. Now that's weird. Because when we first starting liking each other, the way I knew he liked me more [and this is going to sound kind of stupid, this next bit] is that he put in his msn name [yeah, that bit. told yarr.] "MeggILoveYouLikeWoah".

      And that's just plain weird. But thanks for commenting. And for the offer of a vent partner =]

      Noise&&Kisses


  • makeout kid
    February 3, 2007

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    [[But everything becomes an excuse
    when heartache turns to heartbreak]]

    i love that.

    && i love you.


  • sweetpearl
    February 3, 2007

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    "I haven't heard/seen/loved you since November."

    --the slash is used well here.

    "You said I was a.ma.zing
    You promised to love me for.ever
    You said I was special"

    --it feels good to hear these words but I never believe them anymore. I know what it feels like for it to be your fault ... I'm guilty there.

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