You wonder everyday
Has it happened yet
How will you ever know
If it begins
Or maybe ends
Love, lust either one
Feelings no one knows
Heart and mind hide it all
Truth, fate, faith
All included you may not know
One day it will just be one
Put together by destiny
Author notes
I thought about putting a chorus in it but i like it better as a poem
A contest entry
- la la la love! by j-ay rose.
535 points, ended March 8, 2007, 75 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Do my feelings show in here to much?
Comments
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Creativity: 2/10
Concept: 2/10
Language: 3/10
Overall Effect: 2/10
Final Grading: 9/40 -
LOL
I total gave you this title hahah. Love or Lust thats always the question. LOL So why was this little ditty written huh. is there someone you haven't told me about? YOu had better remember to tell me or else. I will get you my pretty and your little music man too. HAhAh. lol I Love You. <3 Lexi -
It does sound alot like a song I could see it either way great flow interesting title very well penned best of luck to you in the contest
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