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Titanic

Walking through sunlight
A smile, just a second,
Holds my heart in its hands
Close the door
Run away
Mystify everything that pulls

And everything about to break

It's the first time in a long time

 

A last kiss

Titanic eyes

Spilling too late for him to see.  

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  • She burns
    March 26, 2007

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    So sad and beautiful at the same time, the hope and tragedy, everything stays and fading away at the same time

    I love the movie Titanic


  • Jax Nova
    February 16, 2007
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    Sad but well written. Nicely described though.


  • bookaddict -SYV-
    February 3, 2007

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    Wow, I love this - clever use of language and very beautiful. Just one thing, in "And eveything about to break" (you missed the "r").



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