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Mother Earth

Suns Fadeing rays, Hit the Earth as the mooon Glides above into the night sky.
Orbs of light swirl Around the Earth, Danceing with the Moon.
The trees Whisper  with the winds, and the Mother Earth Becomes gentle and Falls Asleep.
Now Her Children , Awaken to the Moons Graceful light and Give their hearts to the Mother.
Sorrow does not take Them, Pain does not hurt Them, and light Heals heals Them.
The Gentle Children of Mother Earth See Her inside THemselves>
            Mother Earth Will Forever Hold Them.

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  • azlyn gold member
    February 10, 2007

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    She is a loving Mother indeed. This is a wonderful poem and a beautiful statement of your faith!
    Blessed Be!
    Azlyn


  • wish you loved me
    February 8, 2007
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    great!!!

    great rite...
    true: "Mother Earth Will Forever Hold Them."
    loved that part most of all
    ~HS~


  • Honestly Amazing
    February 3, 2007

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    great poem Becca! I don't know HOW you do it. My favorite part was "The trees whisper with the winds, and the mother earth becomes gentle and falls asleep"

    Samantha


  • Bosky
    February 3, 2007
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    Hey, there, great work, Rebecca!

    Peace out!
    Cassie