No! Take me back!
I knew that heaven existed on Earth,
I knew that all people lived with great mirth,
I knew that my planet was flawless and safe,
I knew there was nothing like war or strafe,
I knew I'd be joyful from moment of birth,
I knew I'd be spared from a life where I'd chafe.
I knew I was content, I knew everyone was,
Yet now I am trapped in the real world, because,
The strands of my dream have been snapped into two,
And now I'm stuck on Earth with those who persue,
A life of their desire, no real strong cause,
No ambition to expose all that is true...
Take me back.
Take the world back.
Author notes
Hmm.
A contest entry
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300 points, ended February 19, 2007, 8 entries
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Very interesting dream. I really like the way it started and it flows nicely. Great work and good luck in this contest.
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Such a deep and thought provoking write. Great flow and content.
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