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Like stars across a galaxy,
love is like light reaching out across the distant expanse of space.
Untouchable energy stirs together,
combining beautifully the colour of all that is.
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A contest entry
- la la la love! by j-ay rose.
535 points, ended March 8, 2007, 77 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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great explaination of love. Love is hard to explain but we need it. You expressed it greatly here. You write was great and your words were profound .great write. Can you give me feedback on my poem Love of my life.
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Thank you hose30
Im happy my experience with love reached you. I'll be sure to check out your write 
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This is absolutely beautiful Apple, a truly meaningful expression.Well done and thankyou for sharing such profoundly wondferful thoughts with us.
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Thank you Stephen sorry i have not been in touch for a while hope things are well your end.
Inspiration from above always helps me write
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Love is so weird sometimes....edk...I say my love life is the sites
Whenever I'm suppose to find love it will happen...
You did a good job on this piece
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Kari Love is mysterious, and patience is a virtue. One day your heart will feel warm loved and the size of the earth ha ha ha until then imagination and hope are also beautiful things.
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