It is now my turn to whisper to you while you sleep... In my mind, I watch adoringly as your chest rises and falls with every breath you take. "I love you" I say quietly, as I look into your sleeping face. You stir, and I smile, watching your own spread across your face. I'm glad I haven't woken you, because I love to watch you sleep. I trace the outline of your face lightly with my finger, and with each passing moment of this time, I can't help but love you more.
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wow this is such an awsome write and i can so relate to this poem. and i so loved reading it and yeah i know how it feels to have a boyfriend sleep while ur their it is cool to watch them sleep because they are relaxed and so cute!!! keep on writing as it is good to get all ur feelings out in the open. i cant wait to read many more of ur pieces. from tash.
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Very sweet write. I enjoyed it. I can see you standing over your child and adoring it. I think their little angels when they sleep. I can relate. Great write!
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