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friendship day

I FOUND YOU . . . . -friendship day 2006.
…. IN MY MOTHER
When she took me on to her lap
            When I was crying aloud
            When she held my hand
            When I was tumbling in my first steps
            When she spoon-fed me her love
          When I was starving for food

….IN MY FATHER
When he caressed me with his loving hands
            When I was sleep-less at the wee hours
When he was so patient in answering me
When I was confused and bewildered
When he drove me on to the right path
When I was standing puzzled at cross roads.

… IN MY TEACHER
When he accepted me into his class
When I did not know how to talk
When he taught me the LIFE
When I was wondered his credentials, when he knows
Every thing by questioning us

….IN MY BOSS
When he became the godfather
When I was far away from mom and dad for the first time.
When he taught me to work
When I was new to even a ruler to draw a line.
When he charged me for perfection
When I was doing the rot in the work..
When he was the GOD at year-ends
When I was looking for a raise.

…. IN MY WIFE
When she waits for me in the evening
When I was enjoying outside in a club
When she looks after my needs every minute
When I didn’t even find time to talk to her.

FRIEND I FIND YOU EVEY WHERE
BE WTH ME ALWAYS IN JOY AND AGONY.
WHY ONLY ON THIS FRIENDSHIP DAY

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  • MoonLady gold member
    July 16, 2007
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    Raising Awareness

    What heart-felt sentiments expressed so beautifully! This poem just happened to pop up when I went to your page; reading it makes me realize how very thankful I am to the many people I encounter who are positive influences, even though it may just be in some small way in passing during the day.

    Rhiannon


  • Welcome-To-Hell
    February 3, 2007

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    This is a wonderful poem but like i said in the rules and poem 1 line over 20 i will throw out and you've well eceeded that

    • chitapoet
      August 13, 2007
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      thanks.
      but tell me. i dont sit specially for a write. it comes of a thought. how can one restrict the flow to lines and dots. sorry i atleast can't. look beyond limits.
      thanks once again.

  • chitapoet
    February 3, 2007
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    the lovable feeling of true freindship, is'nt it