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Broken Fairy Tale [sonnet]

I've been manipulated mentally
many times before.
I've fallen in my own traps hastely
a thousand times, or more.

To take a leap of faith
is the draw of the curtain.
To decide to love or embrace
is the call of uncertain.

My heart fills up with delight
when you are around,
and when you are away it's plight
with clouds of doubt.

I do love you; for that I am sure
but believing in fairytales, is no more.

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  • Princessdove
    February 3, 2007
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    Nice poem. I can relate some.


  • Welcome-To-Hell
    February 3, 2007

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    You know what I love it and the title is perfect so very true fairytales are just that because nothing ever goes that way very well penned best of luck to you in the contest
    Bravo