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Longing

i tell myself
hold it in
no one needs to see
no one should
it is a strange occurance
and vulnerability
is not an option

then i see you
and your story
and while nothings
changed
i feel something
what i dont know
is it even real

and suddenly
my eyes burn
and the world grows
fuzzy and black
and somewhere far away
remembering the past
as well as the future

and the world fades away and nothing is left except this pain and longing that devours me and all of my soul and everything that is a part of me

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