Brush of love
Exhilarating passion
Free in mind and spirit
Bereft of fear
Lost to desire
The essence of life
Finding release
Consuming lust
Whirlwind of emotions
Flying, soaring,
higher than ever before
Soft touch
Overwhelming moment
Love
A contest entry
- la la la love! by j-ay rose.
535 points, ended March 8, 2007, 75 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful
Felt the wings on this one. Truly makes one fly.
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thanks so much
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This is pretty nice, but it seems like nothing more than a list of words. Thank you for entering my contest.
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This is an awesome write!!!! Shows the different kinds of feelings involved with loving someone. Great job expressing them!!!!
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thanks so much
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pure love
wonderful write.... this is beautiful. I love it. Great luck in the contest. I hope that you do well. You had such feeling and emotion here.
DF 40
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thanks so much.
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Very good writting here, you have hit the feeling of love. Good luck in the contest.
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thanks so very much for your kind words
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this is beautiful, the purity as love itself! i love love too! its a fantastic feeling/emotion and you've captured it nicely in this piece very well written! congrates! Hx
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thanks so much. it's hard to capture something so incredible in words, but i tried.
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