If I could find a word to define
How you make feel on the inside.
Maybe I could write you a little rhyme.
But I dont know how with what I have.
I just want to let you see just exactly what you do to me.
Deep in my heart where you sun shines.
Where there is no time keeping.
These feelings of mine they will go on till the end of time.
I want to have more to prove unto you.
That my feelings are real and my heart beats true.
Everynight I want to be the one you reach to.
when you are down and your tears are about to drown you.
I will be there to pick you up and rescue you.
To wipe away the tears in your eyes and look deep inside.
Letting you know I am there and im never going to leave.
So please my love I stand here in the cold world outside your heart.
I knock lightly so not to break it into pieces.
Let me in and rekindle the fire inside the one I see.
Everytime we talk it is in your words dont give up.
I love you...
Author notes
Yes I know my flow sucks the ryhtms off and it rhymes in places not others and it feels left unfinished but its perfect to me.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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good write
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dang boy, this is good, maybe this girl should wake up and realize it...maybe you should just tell her....idk..but a great write neways keep the pen flowing! Emily
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WILLIE HASA GIRLFRIEND!! (JK)
Awe this is very sweet and touching. I've NEVER seen this side of you. Are you sick or something?
JK JK JK. It's nice to know someone as dumb and funny as you has a love. Wait...I think I just decribed myself there. Oh well.
The only thing that throws me off is the period at the end of EVERY line. I don't get it. My poetry is all in stanzas not ong big massive....paragraph? Other than that, great write Will. Kudos to you! ♥
-Melanie
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