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Kiss in the Night

The warm breath upon my skin
Sent an exhilarating chill down my spine
My mouth met by a familiar pair of lips
Hands exploring the length of my body
Pausing to tease between my thighs
My breath caught in my throat
As he slowly closed the distance between us
Sensually his tongue slid into my mouth
A demanding kiss divulging his desire
His mouth finally traveling down my throat
Open against my racing pulse
The invigorating anticipation that his teeth would kiss the throb of my heart
A feeling of euphoria numbing my body as his teeth pierce skin
Gasp of pleasure escaping my lips as the blood spills against his pale lips
Raining down my collarbone
I let my head fall back into his cradled embrace
My body his temple
His exotic scent intoxicating, stimulating
Seeming to set my senses ablaze

Author notes

Not a finish thing...just a start to get down while I had time. I will come back to finish I PROMISE!
But enjoy what is here

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  • Love-EroticPoet
    January 21, 2008
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    Sexy the whole poem was stimulating hiting my artistic senses


  • Allure of a Rose
    March 11, 2007
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    Oooh, I love. =]
    Very... exhilerating, (am I spelling that right?)
    You have very well re-created this familiar feeling for me, and it was a great comfort after a lonely day.
    Excellent job.
    Message me if you finish it, loves- That is, if it still needs finishing, I think it's great as it is, but if you've got more I wouldn't turn it down.

    Love and kisses!

    Allura


  • dark-dreamer112
    February 18, 2007
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    I really like it. I hope you finish it ^_^


  • KatandLRpoetry
    February 11, 2007
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    tell me when u do

    Its a great poem with great imagry, good job


  • Dalden
    February 7, 2007
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    Finish it!! O.O If you don't I will be pissed off.

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