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i can feel.... DAMNT

I cut to see if i still feel
Blood a tasty meal
As I see
Theres no place for me here
I start drinking my life away
Beer - Bleach each a different cure

As i medicate this addiction of mine
Memories are renewed and abuse whats left of thee
Calling for someone or anything
Wishing i had a pill or two
Anything to take me away from here

Please tell me what you think

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  • crazypie
    February 8, 2007

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    hey

    man kelse that was sad
    i hope u really don't feel like that cuz if u do u should talk to me bout it
    anywayz it's good


  • JonKohan
    February 5, 2007
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    a pretty good poem. a good title. an all around good job, keep up the good work

    Jonny


  • JelloMorrison
    February 4, 2007
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    classy

    this is really cool i like this poem