The sea floats gently
as the vibrant pinks reflect
from the star-strewn sky.
Author notes
This is a haiku!!
Whoo!
I actually wrote this a while ago... A couple of months really. I don't know. But I really like it and I hope you do also!
A contest entry
- 14 and Under: Form Poetry by Max Ritvo.
375 points, ended April 21, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Can you picture it?
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This is such a beautiful Haiku!! So full of wonderful imagery and emotion. Just an excellent write in every way. I am sorry that I did not get to Hood-Wink yesterday, but I am doing it now. I hope that yesterday was wonderful for you. Have a blessed night.
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Hood Wink
Beautifully imagery here my friend. I can't write haiku's for the life of me. I just hate all those precise syllable counts. But I think I am going to have a try working with some more formal layed out poetry for a change... Just incase someone wants to publish me (yeah right). -
Very nice haiku my friend and the image evoked is magnificent. BTW I actually used food color once for my kids to make green eggs and ham, ROFMAO they laffed so hard milk came out da noses!! they loved it of course but I was forever doing silly things like that *sigh* i miss that stuff hehe. Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors.
Hetohke'e * 
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I do like it, it has all the elements I'm looking for in this contest, fabulous job
I thank you for taking the time to enter this contest and wish you the very best of luck
Karen -
I Do really like it!
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